Adressing comments from the first AppStore review: 1. don't mention android, 2. don't use word 'demo', replace it with 'showcase'. AppStore
authorJaroslav Tulach <jaroslav.tulach@apidesign.org>
Thu, 14 Aug 2014 07:50:10 +0200
branchAppStore
changeset 197197472ca59d4
parent 195 d1e02a40c201
child 198 0e2b05057c97
Adressing comments from the first AppStore review: 1. don't mention android, 2. don't use word 'demo', replace it with 'showcase'.
minesweeper/Info.plist.xml
minesweeper/pom.xml
minesweeper/src/main/webapp/pages/android_logo.jpg
minesweeper/src/main/webapp/pages/index.html
minesweeper/src/main/webapp/pages/safari_logo.png
     1.1 --- a/minesweeper/Info.plist.xml	Thu Aug 07 15:11:55 2014 +0200
     1.2 +++ b/minesweeper/Info.plist.xml	Thu Aug 14 07:50:10 2014 +0200
     1.3 @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
     1.4          <key>CFBundleSignature</key>
     1.5          <string>????</string>
     1.6          <key>CFBundleVersion</key>
     1.7 -        <string>1</string>
     1.8 +        <string>2</string>
     1.9          <key>NSHumanReadableCopyright</key>
    1.10          <string>Copyright © 2014 Jaroslav Tulach. All rights reserved.</string>
    1.11          <key>LSRequiresIPhoneOS</key>
     2.1 --- a/minesweeper/pom.xml	Thu Aug 07 15:11:55 2014 +0200
     2.2 +++ b/minesweeper/pom.xml	Thu Aug 14 07:50:10 2014 +0200
     2.3 @@ -476,7 +476,7 @@
     2.4                <dependency>
     2.5                    <groupId>org.apidesign.brwsr</groupId>
     2.6                    <artifactId>ibrwsr</artifactId>
     2.7 -                  <version>1.0-SNAPSHOT</version>
     2.8 +                  <version>0.8.3</version>
     2.9                    <scope>runtime</scope>
    2.10                </dependency>
    2.11            </dependencies>
     3.1 Binary file minesweeper/src/main/webapp/pages/android_logo.jpg has changed
     4.1 --- a/minesweeper/src/main/webapp/pages/index.html	Thu Aug 07 15:11:55 2014 +0200
     4.2 +++ b/minesweeper/src/main/webapp/pages/index.html	Thu Aug 14 07:50:10 2014 +0200
     4.3 @@ -94,13 +94,13 @@
     4.4          
     4.5          <div class="jumbotron control-label" data-bind="visible: !fieldShowing() ">
     4.6              <div class="container">
     4.7 -                <h1>HTML/Java Technology Demo</h1>
     4.8 +                <h1>HTML/Java Technology Showcase</h1>
     4.9  
    4.10                  <p>At first sight this is an old good <em>minesweeper</em>
    4.11 -                    game. At closer look, this is a demo of a revolutionary 
    4.12 +                    game. At closer look, this is a sample use of a revolutionary 
    4.13                      technology that allows you to use <strong>Java</strong>
    4.14                      to code your application logic and present it using
    4.15 -                    <strong>HTML</strong> on any device capable of rendering
    4.16 +                    <strong>HTML</strong> on any device providing
    4.17                      modern <strong>HTML5</strong> browser.
    4.18                  </p>
    4.19                  <p><a class="btn btn-primary btn-lg" role="button" 
    4.20 @@ -112,11 +112,11 @@
    4.21  
    4.22      <div class="container" data-bind="visible: !fieldShowing()">
    4.23        <div>
    4.24 -        <div class="col-md-4">
    4.25 +        <div class="col-sm-8 col-md-6">
    4.26            <h2>Minesweeper</h2>
    4.27            <p>
    4.28                Discover ten square fields that contain a mine and
    4.29 -              mark them with a &#x26a0; sign.
    4.30 +              mark them with a <b>&#x26a0;</b> sign.
    4.31                Touch a square to find out if there is
    4.32                a mine or not and
    4.33                how many mines are in the eight surrounding 
    4.34 @@ -126,57 +126,39 @@
    4.35            </p>
    4.36            <p><a class="btn btn-default" href="#" data-bind="click: normalGame"role="button">Play &raquo;</a></p>
    4.37          </div>
    4.38 -        <div class="col-md-4">
    4.39 +        <div class="col-sm-8 col-md-6">
    4.40            <h2>Documentation</h2>
    4.41            <p>
    4.42                In case you want to write application like 
    4.43                this (e.g. use <strong>Java</strong> and <strong>HTML</strong>)
    4.44                you can learn more about the libraries that
    4.45                make that possible. Follow this link to
    4.46 -              our documentation.
    4.47 +              <em>HTML for Java</em> documentation.
    4.48            </p>
    4.49            <p><a class="btn btn-default"
    4.50                  target="_blank" href="http://bits.netbeans.org/html+java/"
    4.51                  role="button">Read more &raquo;</a></p>
    4.52         </div>
    4.53 -        <div class="col-md-4">
    4.54 -          <h2>Run in a Browser</h2>
    4.55 -          <p>
    4.56 -              While primarily this technology runs on a desktop
    4.57 -              or as a table or phone application, it is possible
    4.58 -              to execute the same unchanged code in a browser 
    4.59 -              as well. To do so, one needs a 
    4.60 -              <a href="http://bck2brwsr.apidesign.org">bck2brwsr</a>
    4.61 -              virtual machine.
    4.62 -          </p>
    4.63 -          <p><a class="btn btn-default"
    4.64 -                target="_blank" href="http://xelfi.cz/minesweeper/bck2brwsr/"
    4.65 -                role="button">Try it &raquo;</a></p>
    4.66 -       </div>
    4.67        </div>
    4.68      </div>
    4.69  <div class="container" data-bind="visible: !fieldShowing()">
    4.70    <div class="col-sm-6 col-md-4">
    4.71      <div class="thumbnail">
    4.72 -        <img src="android_logo.jpg" width="120" height="120" alt="Android">
    4.73 +        <img src="safari_logo.png" width="120" height="120" alt="Safari">
    4.74        <div class="caption">
    4.75 -        <h3>DlvkBrwsr</h3>
    4.76 -        <p>
    4.77 -            This application has been packaged to run on your Android phone
    4.78 -            and is available on Google Play! In this mode it
    4.79 -            uses Dalvik virtual machine to execute Java code natively.
    4.80 -            It uses Android's WebView to display the UI and execute
    4.81 -            generated JavaScript. Both these components are
    4.82 -            bound together via <a href="http://wiki.apidesign.org/wiki/DlvkBrwsr">
    4.83 -            DlvkBrwsr</a>.
    4.84 -        </p>
    4.85 -        <p>
    4.86 -            <a href="https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=org.apidesign.demo.minesweeper"
    4.87 -               target="_blank"
    4.88 -               class="btn btn-primary" role="button"
    4.89 -               >Install &raquo;</a> 
    4.90 -        </p>
    4.91 -      </div>
    4.92 +          <h3>Run in a Browser</h3>
    4.93 +          <p>
    4.94 +              While primarily this technology runs on a desktop
    4.95 +              or as a tablet or phone application, it is also possible
    4.96 +              to execute the same unchanged code directly in a browser 
    4.97 +              as well. To do so, one needs a 
    4.98 +              <a href="http://bck2brwsr.apidesign.org">bck2brwsr</a>
    4.99 +              virtual machine.
   4.100 +          </p>
   4.101 +          <p><a class="btn btn-primary" role="button"
   4.102 +                target="_blank" href="http://xelfi.cz/minesweeper/bck2brwsr/"
   4.103 +             >Try it &raquo;</a></p>
   4.104 +       </div>
   4.105      </div>
   4.106    </div>
   4.107    <div class="col-sm-6 col-md-4">
   4.108 @@ -186,7 +168,7 @@
   4.109          <h3>iBrwsr</h3>
   4.110          <p>
   4.111              This application can also be packaged to run on your iPhone
   4.112 -            or iPad. It is not yet available on AppStore, but it will.
   4.113 +            or iPad.
   4.114              In this mode it
   4.115              uses <a target="_blank" href="http://www.robovm.org">RoboVM</a> 
   4.116              virtual machine to execute Java code natively.
     5.1 Binary file minesweeper/src/main/webapp/pages/safari_logo.png has changed